Should Plastic bags be used at super markets?

Last week in Te Ngahere we did a  persuasive piece of writing about should plastic bags be used in super markets. Our WALT for this activity was to use the correct structure for a persuasive. I think I did really well on trying to make my ideas original in my writing.

18/10/17

Walt: Make my ideas original, so the reader can connect with them.

Should Plastic bags be used at supermarkets?

Plastic bags should not be sold at supermarkets because they are destroying our environment and killing our sea creatures and if this goes on for a very long time it might even kill all of our sea creatures.

Should plastic bags be used in supermarkets? No! They should not give out plastic bags for you to put your groceries in, they should use reusable bags in supermarkets. Why? Because they are spreading worldwide, and they are very hard to get rid of.

Plastic bags in up into our sea and start that's for fear on them. Why? Because we just let plastic fly away into the ocean and the sea creatures think it is food and they eat it and die.

Even our bird life is bad because when they go and find food for their young ones they pick up rubbish and feed it to them they eat it and when the mother bird keeps doing it the poison from the rubbish digest in the stomach and then they die, and when you split the stomach open there are big pieces of rubbish in them the only rubbish that digest in the bird.

When you put the plastic bags in the rubbish bin the the rubbish track takes it away and then the rubbish gets piled up and all the rubbish just lays there and all the plastic under it and in the middle can never be bernt or never disappearing it’s just gonna stay there for ever and soak into the soil.

Thanks for reading my should plastic bags be used at supermarkets, and I hope you learnt lots.

Recount Making Ice Cream!

On Friday Te Ngahere made nice ice cream, because we had 100% right in our Learning Plans. Then on Monday we had to write a recount about how we made the ice cream. We worked in pairs and I worked with Lesane.

Monday 19th June 2017

WALT: Semicolons, Adjectives, Adverbs and Metaphors.

Making ICE CREAM!

Last Week on Friday Te Ngahere made some cold vanilla ice cream.

Also we had to have buddies and my buddy was Lesane.

First you: put one cup of cream into the bag we had to get a little plastic bag and then you have to put two scoop falls of sugar into the plastic bag, then you put ½ a teaspoon of vanilla escents into the bag then you put the bag down.  Next you get a bigger plastic bag and put some ice into the bag then put 6 scoops of salt into the bag now you put the little bag into the big plastic bag. (Make sure you close the little bag up or you will have salty and ice cream.) Now you go outside and shake it all up until it gets hard, when that is done you take the little bag out of the big bag and tip the ice out of the bag and chuck it into the rubbish then go and put it  into the fridge now for a little bit.

Now we are cleaning up the classroom getting ready to eat Ice Cream (YUM!)

We all went outside and sat down, Brodi and Alexis came and gave us all of our Ice cream bags. Then we got given success to cut a little bit by the corner so we can eat it. When Lesane gave me the ice cream bag it was so cold and salty but YUM! When I was eating the ice cream it was soft ice.

At the end of eating my Ice cream we did a big clean up in the class and a little bit outside getting ready for assembly.

The End!

Having Dinner

This is my menu for dinner on Chrismas night, and I learnt how to write a menu.

Fun Time

Last week everyone went to Action World, it was so fun. I went on the really big slide, it was so scary and fun. I also went on the big tight rope, I am not good on the tight rope I keep falling off.

How to babysit your Nana

Hi, this is my slide show we were writing a story about how to babysit you Grandma or your Grandad. Also I learnt how to write a list of instructions.
I hope you enjoy my slide show.

My Toast Story

I learnt how to write a procedure piece of writing. Also on our first piece of writing our teacher, got us to act it out in pairs it was fun doing that.

Kiana's Narrative Story

I learnt how to write a narrative and I need to improve on alliteration and speech marks.